I believe everything published was very reasonable. But, consider this, what if you were to create a awesome headline? I ain't saying your information is not solid., but what if you added a headline to maybe get a person's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda boring. You could look at Yahoo's front page and note how they create article headlines to grab people interested. You might add a video or a pic or two to grab readers excited about what you've written. Just my opinion, it would make your posts a little livelier.